Bon Joure Junior it's Abbie here from Totara 4,I really like your poem and the language features you used it really put in an image in my mind! Next time you could maybe put a little bit of rhyme in there! What language features did you use? From Abbie
Bon Joure Junior it's Abbie here from Totara 4,I really like your poem and the language features you used it really put in an image in my mind!
ReplyDeleteNext time you could maybe put a little bit of rhyme in there!
What language features did you use?
From Abbie
What a great poem! I love your use of simile. You are a poet!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Junior Its Belle and i think this post is really cool but i question why is there two?????
ReplyDeletebye just saying that so you know
I don't know but i'll finger it out
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