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My discovery of the Egyptian tomb.

Dear diary:

 On early April 2 1952, me and my group were planning to go on an adventure to the Egyptian deserts in north Africa where the Nile river is located. We drove all the way to the airport, to get our tickets for our flight to the africa. After hours on the plane, we finally arrived in Africa, so we started our adventure to try and discover artifacts in the desert, we had all the things we needed to start our adventure in the mysterious desert. We started a big party search to find ancient artifact from egyption royal tombs and etc..

There were 4 of us, each one took North, South, West and the East. I took the South.

So here I am by myself  searching the desert, with the uncompany of the heating sun.  As I traveled throughout the heating desert, I came across a permanent, my emotions were quickly heighted and I was feeling scared to see what was in the tomb or what could be roaming in it. But if I don’t there won’t be a point of us coming here anyways. 

So I called my group to meet me . The problem is it took them like 3 hours to arrive, Once they all arrived, we decided to go and check out whatever is in that permanent. So we got in without any regrets. Inside was dark and and real creepy, we walked inside it like it was forever, but the next thing I saw was a coffin. I was too afraid to open or to get close to it, thinking something would jump out and eat us all. So my friend Zac went to check it out, when he opened there was a mummy wrapped  in  wrappers but there were 4 artefacts of different animals faces. 

I was scared to open it because I heard that when an Egyptian person or a royal person  dies they have to take out the organ of the body. 

After being in the permanent we took everything valuable including the mummy and the coffin/Tomb. We took to our lab. And tried to research it to see if we could find anything useful.

After researching important values and who died in the tomb, it turns out who died was just a loyal servant to a powerful king, Pharaoh.